So I'm going through each chapter and attempting to clean things up.
I'll also be addressing that one discrepancy in chapter 10, so far I've edited until chapter 7.

Also I am working on Luna's speech pattern. Please help me out and let me know if I'm doing a good job, what I should change, or if I should go back to the way I had it.

It's been three years since I last attempted to give writing advice. Now that I've had time to lick my wounds, here we go again!

First off, we need to be a little bit pedantic here. According to Dictionary.com, vernacular means expressed or written in the native language of a place, as literary works, and I'm going to be applying it to much, much more.

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Speaking conventions in the show are always a bit strange but its the inconsistencies in 'Old Ponish' that really bring out issues, especially for writers like me who are trying to rewrite a great deal of canon.

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